Captivated by You | BL

I legitimately just couldn't even finish the trial read due to how bad this novel is. The system feels fine, but everything else about the world and characters feels wrong. Things just don't play out how they should and there's an obsession with face slapping boring characters in uninteresting ways. Teachers are actualyl fine tho for some reason, they are actually pretty good.

As long as this is not a harem novel or full plot armour MC then this would be a promising comedy novel.Most often than not, the novel descriptions rarely tell wether the novel good or not but i will vote this because we need more comedy.

Love the story and want to read after 40! Please don't let this story not get picked! I'll literally cry if I can't read more! Alright, done, wait why do I need to have so many words?!

The plot and world building is fine. Generic but that isn't a bad thing. I would continue reading but with the MC's personality, it's too difficult. If you don't mind a protagonist with a horrible personality and character, then it is still worth reading. Protagonist is deceitful, dishonest, arrogant, violent, and delusional. He is worse than the typical "arrogant young master."

Do you have all broken talents from other novels together, one of then is more than enough to make any conflict become meaningless and the author have the brillant idea to mix them up

Give my own book a shameless review ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️But as my readers, you can give honest feedback. It will help me improve my story. Thank youJomegs ❤️

oh wow, I didn't expect to see this here.  Thanks for translating this story 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Pretty good story. It's well planned and enjoyable to read. The Mc is not naive and is brutal when needed. Tbh I'm lazy so I will stop my review rn. Also to the people that spam single stars on novels, it doesn't matter for what reason, just leave a truthful review and gtfo out. I have seen too many good/decent novels get dropped because of the reason ''oh wow, this novel has too many stars and ratings that it doesn't deserve, I'm gonna spam my review'' Like pls you haven't even read the novel, and if the story was bad then people who read it can leave a review of what they think and why they don't like it. ._. 1 review per person. This can also apply to the people who spam 5 stars. Last time I checked this ain't a dick measuring contest, if it was, it would be clear that my domineering pp energy will win, I cultivate my golden dragon day and night, I suffer an hour of anguish trying to reach the peak and feel the pleasure of heaven. My arts have already surpassed mortal limits. To those that disagree come here and have a sword fight with this young master, my golden dragon rips the earth and shakes the heavens. Survive one thrust and you're a man above mortals, survive ten thrusts and you're a god, survive one hundred thrusts and you shall be my wife. My pp energy is beyond your knowledge, Everyone knows me but fears to call me my real name, yet I cry, why does everyone call me Mommy or Mother. Everyone is just blind to the truth, it's impossible to not see my overwhelming pp energy, so please stop your lies and stop calling me Mommy. I may give people head pats and have people sit on my lap but I swear on the heavens these cute actions are manly.